http://www.quaketastic.com/files/demos/shamofsolace.zip

Pros:
Main rooms have some real strong designs
Consistent E3-ish theme
Blood is a cool addition
Little wall damage / alcove things cool
Nice secret alcoves to explore
Generally fun gameplay
Double Shamblers good

Cons:
Design structures pretty inconsistent in terms of angles / styles
Stronger design ideas not capitalised on
Coloured lighting really needed toned down by half
Some areas could have been better used / more populated
End-game relatively weak 

I had fun playing it and some areas / details grabbed me, but I think there was something more amazing trying to get out here.